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    Ye jaan shikasta jaal hai

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    Post by crimson.soul Wed Nov 11, 2009 7:43 am

    is toote dil ka kya kahon
    wajood is ka pur-malaal hai
    muje apne hathon mein samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai.

    Main to aisa daryaa hon,
    jise rah mein logo ne loota hai
    gair to gair hote hain
    apno ka sath bhe choota hai
    mere pair shul ho chuke
    ab to zuban b gung hai
    aisa bhatka raahi hon
    na rang hai, na koi sung hai

    bhatak bhatak kr thak chuka
    ye wajood ab nidhaal hai
    use keh de mje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai

    q meri trf koi nigah uthaye
    q meri trf koi qadam brharye
    q de koi mje dil mein jaga
    q muje koi apna bnaye

    khata hai meri yehe k
    main muhabbat ka swali hon
    saza hai meri yehe k
    main har saath se khali hon

    bohat sitam seh chuka hon attique
    ye rooh ab be-haal hai
    use keh de muje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai

    use keh de muje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai


    friends neither em a proper poet nor i write something to get appreciation.These words represent just my emotions.
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    Post by Asim Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:15 am

    really nice
    very sad poetry man is it ur showing life experience or u just like it
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    Post by crimson.soul Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:25 am

    Hmmm. Bro it does not reflect my life as much as it shows. Precisely n in short words, I like this way.
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    Post by Asim Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:28 am

    hmm ok
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    Post by Tooba Khan Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:22 am

    crimson.soul wrote:is toote dil ka kya kahon
    wajood is ka pur-malaal hai
    muje apne hathon mein samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai.

    Main to aisa daryaa hon,
    jise rah mein logo ne loota hai
    gair to gair hote hain
    apno ka sath bhe choota hai
    mere pair shul ho chuke
    ab to zuban b gung hai
    aisa bhatka raahi hon
    na rang hai, na koi sung hai

    bhatak bhatak kr thak chuka
    ye wajood ab nidhaal hai
    use keh de mje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai

    q meri trf koi nigah uthaye
    q meri trf koi qadam brharye
    q de koi mje dil mein jaga
    q muje koi apna bnaye

    khata hai meri yehe k
    main muhabbat ka swali hon
    saza hai meri yehe k
    main har saath se khali hon

    bohat sitam seh chuka hon attique
    ye rooh ab be-haal hai
    use keh de muje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai

    use keh de muje samait le
    ye jaan shikasta jaal hai


    friends neither em a proper poet nor i write something to get appreciation.These words represent just my emotions.

    is ds really your own creation
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    Post by crimson.soul Wed Nov 11, 2009 3:30 pm

    Alhamdulilah. Any doubt?
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    Post by Asim Wed Nov 11, 2009 4:02 pm

    welldone
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    Post by Tooba Khan Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:30 pm

    crimson.soul wrote:Alhamdulilah. Any doubt?

    nyc work Smile
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    Post by MushTaQ Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:36 am

    crimson.soul wrote:


    friends neither em a proper poet nor i write something to get appreciation.These words represent just my emotions.

    wow.. great...nicely done..!!!
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    Post by ..::adnan::. Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:10 pm

    wah g wah SUBHANALLAH
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    Post by crimson.soul Thu Nov 12, 2009 6:22 pm

    Thanx to all
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    Post by crimson.soul Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:43 am

    mitne chle the apni zaat, ye soch kr
    k wo hamain nhe sochta
    kuch door ja k ruk gye, ye soch kr
    koi to hamain b sochta hog ga    (attique)

    so if you cant live for urself then live for others.
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    Post by Tooba Khan Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:47 pm

    wah ji wah
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    Post by crimson.soul Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:07 pm

    On demand: Wink

    muje us se pyar hai, sach he to kaha tha main ne
    afsos, k wo shakhs mera tarz-e-takalluf na samajh ska    (attique)
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    Post by Tooba Khan Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:13 pm

    wao thx 4 sharng ere Smile
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    Post by crimson.soul Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:15 pm

    Main ap ka thnx accept nhe krta. Can u guess y?
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    Post by Tooba Khan Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:19 pm

    no Surprised y ???
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    Post by crimson.soul Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:32 pm

    Bht sada magar solid reason hai. Thora socho to sahe
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    Post by Tooba Khan Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:39 pm

    ahan i thnk no sory n no thx in frndshp Smile
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    Post by crimson.soul Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:48 pm

    Hmmm. Gud. Wink exactly
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    Post by crimson.soul Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:49 pm

    Nigahe mast se dekhte ho, chairte ho, phr nikal jate ho
    hum b rooth jain agr, pas ate ho, hamain manate ho
    jo warq-e-dil, tmhare samne rakh dete hain hum
    bre naz se uthate ho, parhte ho, phr jalate ho
    hamain tmhara andaz-e-guftgu nhe smjh ata
    kbi sung mere hanste ho, hansate ho, phr rulate ho
    ba-khuda bri kashmakash mubtala hain hum
    tum hamain q apna bnate ho, torte ho, phr chor jate ho    (attique)
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    Post by Tooba Khan Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:52 pm

    ab sahi jaggah post ki hai gud
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